Looks awesome and cruel, but honestly I don't know if they would take something so brutal looking in a Game rated pg13, but I really don't know. Me for myself loves it. Just add the yellow background over the whole pic, as it is. just rocks left and right of it. Well done
Consider yourself awesome! I haven't added a single piece this "unfinished" to my Rift-Elite collection until now. Even at this rough stage it communicates very well. I love the design on the wings. Absolutely love them.